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Post by Deleted on Jul 3, 2012 14:33:26 GMT -5
Hmm... I disagree a bit with the episode description, I must say. After having spent the night with Maddie, for David a dream had come true. And the way he reacted when they woke up, in my book showed he wasn't feeling awkward at all! He was feeling totally at ease with himself, with them, with the situation - he was happy.
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Post by Addison's girl on Jul 3, 2012 20:28:58 GMT -5
;)He was too glib..not awkward at all.
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Post by Addison's girl on Jul 3, 2012 20:33:44 GMT -5
Let's change the description. How's this..Maddie feels awkward and uncomfortable about finally consummating her relationship with David. He is feeling slap happy but is surprised to find the next morning that Maddie wants to make a pact that the previous night never happened. David finally agrees to her pact but manages to seduce her with his molasses coated voice into breaking the pact....add more Sandra and we will change description.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2012 0:54:16 GMT -5
Not glib... LOL simply happy.
The description - hmm, how much into detail do you wanna go? I'd just say (like you are suggesting) while he is happy about finally having consummated the relationship, she is ferling awkward and obviously having second thoughts. She suggests they make a pact it never happened and will never happen again, and against his conviction David agrees, but their attraction gets the better of them, and they just can't seem to keep it. Then a few words about the case.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2012 4:01:52 GMT -5
Yup... that's better! ;D
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Post by bluemoongirl on Jul 20, 2012 13:20:06 GMT -5
I love that description Sandra.
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